Writing III IELTS Writing Task 1: Graph Bar-Leisure-Act-Teen-INA

The graph bar gives information about some activities that most Indonesian teenagers do in their free time. Overall, there are some significant differences among them in some of the leisure activities.

First of all, it shows the boys are more active in most of the activities. Surprisingly almost 35% of the male spend their time shopping, and it does not seem so normal if compared to the girls where only about 5% of them do shopping. Next is the Sports section, of course, the boys do sports more. It seems that there are more than 25% of boys and about 10% of girls use their spare time in sports.

Despite the activities mentioned before that dominated by the boys, some activities attract more girls than sports and shopping. The first is computer games. It seems that females are having so much fun in gaming. There are almost 15% of girls playing PC games, and of course, the boys also win this one but not in a significant number. Besides, the last thing that teenagers do with their spare time is listening to music. It looks like that music attracts attention for both genders equally. Apart from this, it shows they are on the same number, almost 20% of men and women in Indonesia listening to music in their free time. 

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Andi Kaswan