Kamis, 22 April 2021

Writing III IELTS Writing Task 2: Agree/disagree

 

Topic: Agree/disagree essay

Some people believe that money is the key of happiness. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The currency is a crucial aspect of our world. It keeps things running and has such a big impact on the life of human beings. Some people argue that having so much cash in the pocket could give them enthusiasm. For me, I think it is very reasonable to think like that and my reasons as follows.

The first is money could get us anything we want. People always want something, but not all of them could get it because they cannot afford it. We illustrated this by a boy who wants a toy but his parents have no money to buy it, so the kid is not happy and starts crying, however when his parents get the toy for him, the kid is smiling and feeling happy about it. Another point is with money, buying the things you like is no problem anymore. Afterward, that makes life feel so much better than having no money.

The second reason is with a high amount of income, we do not have to worry about the cost of living anymore. Many people often feel depressed when they need something but cannot get it. Just look around us, many kids drop out of school because their parent's income is low even they want to continue their studies. So if we have a lot of money, a problem like this is not going to happen in the future.

To sum up, I do believe that having enough money is what makes people feel happy. The people who have more funds will enjoy their life because they can have anything they want, on top of that they are not thinking about the financial problem for the rest of their life. 

(285 Words)

Andi Kaswan

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